Hey Everyone! These are my homepages so far. The one with the Airplane is my splash page/welcome one and the map is showing off destinations on where you can go. Let me know what you think!
I'm less sure about the map page for a few reasons: 1) The colors seem unrelated to the splash page. they are cool where your splash page is warm. Maybe match the blues to the sky picture? 2) Unless I know what the locations do when you roll over/click on them, the map isn't very interesting. It's pretty standard. That's not necessarily a bad thing, but your brand seems more innovative than your run-of-the-mill map! 3) The "Choose A Destination" text could maybe me moved somewhere else? It fits nicely between South America and Australia, but then you are left with lots of space on the right and left of the page. Just a thought!
Overall, looks really good!! Great photos, your fonts are working well together, and you've got a really well-though-out look going!
Thanks Rachel! I'll work on the map page more to make it relate. I thought about putting the names on there after i posted. thanks for the suggestions! :)
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Your splash page looks great! Finished, even!
I'm less sure about the map page for a few reasons:
1) The colors seem unrelated to the splash page. they are cool where your splash page is warm. Maybe match the blues to the sky picture?
2) Unless I know what the locations do when you roll over/click on them, the map isn't very interesting. It's pretty standard. That's not necessarily a bad thing, but your brand seems more innovative than your run-of-the-mill map!
3) The "Choose A Destination" text could maybe me moved somewhere else? It fits nicely between South America and Australia, but then you are left with lots of space on the right and left of the page. Just a thought!
Overall, looks really good!! Great photos, your fonts are working well together, and you've got a really well-though-out look going!
Thanks Rachel! I'll work on the map page more to make it relate. I thought about putting the names on there after i posted. thanks for the suggestions! :)
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